tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3322342997539658469.post7776990842640621502..comments2023-03-27T00:20:52.470-07:00Comments on Ruin: Chapter 2 The VoiceThe Lunar Foxhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00300943457749354465noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3322342997539658469.post-31761015058839890672011-02-12T14:34:06.154-08:002011-02-12T14:34:06.154-08:00Aw, thank you, Jennifer. That really means a lot.Aw, thank you, Jennifer. That really means a lot.The Lunar Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300943457749354465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3322342997539658469.post-85420587386146884432011-02-12T03:17:17.894-08:002011-02-12T03:17:17.894-08:00Awww...I loved the conversation back and fourth be...Awww...I loved the conversation back and fourth between Edy and Michael, so cute. And how cool are those powers of his! Wow!<br /><br />Love your writing Lunar, everything you describe flows so beautifully.Jenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04261344314447423273noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3322342997539658469.post-77754547846283780892010-01-20T20:05:35.280-08:002010-01-20T20:05:35.280-08:00Hey, MM. Welcome back. :D And thank you. You&#...Hey, MM. Welcome back. :D And thank you. You'll definitely hear more about that bit later on.The Lunar Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300943457749354465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3322342997539658469.post-29917393500706369362010-01-20T15:37:47.212-08:002010-01-20T15:37:47.212-08:00I love how you made the two physical, yet not, in ...I love how you made the two physical, yet not, in the memory! Very clever!<br /><br />I'm also curious about how Edith's family came to the lab (other than her dad moved them there).K. Hoisingtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07500439165285163987noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3322342997539658469.post-71347418185915477152009-11-15T18:02:30.417-08:002009-11-15T18:02:30.417-08:00Thanks, Billy! I'm really glad you're enj...Thanks, Billy! I'm really glad you're enjoying it. This story means a lot to me. It was originally hard to share.The Lunar Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300943457749354465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3322342997539658469.post-71915710111946493092009-11-15T16:13:03.979-08:002009-11-15T16:13:03.979-08:00I am really liking this story, TLF!
I love how c...I am really liking this story, TLF! <br /><br />I love how creative you are. I too liked that last blurry picture.<br /><br />I like Michael and Edy as best friends.bbophttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11332545298607375114noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3322342997539658469.post-92042171848295545682009-10-25T17:37:18.108-07:002009-10-25T17:37:18.108-07:00Well, I think part of the problem was that I hadn&...Well, I think part of the problem was that I hadn't clearly explained the term "experiment" so I'm very glad you asked! It was just something I took for granted. By the time this chapter was up, everyone was all, "OH, she was just there, not experimented on."<br /><br />I'll have to make sure in the next update to put a footnote that I updated the glossary with some super important terms that I forgot about. XDThe Lunar Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300943457749354465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3322342997539658469.post-68397472323172972772009-10-25T16:29:09.451-07:002009-10-25T16:29:09.451-07:00I love this flashback. It explains just why they a...I love this flashback. It explains just why they are so close. Michael can just climb in her head and (again) Edy is just totally trusts him.<br /><br />After reading the comments,I feel a bit weird for NOT once thinking that she is the one undergoing experiments. In chapter one you describe her as 'human' not as 'an experiment' and when Michael makes the link for the first time it is obvious he is kept soemwhere in the lab. I hope it's not Edy's father who is experimenting on him...Moondaisynoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3322342997539658469.post-41941007900778554852009-10-03T11:54:32.722-07:002009-10-03T11:54:32.722-07:00Ooh I was with the others in the assumption that E...Ooh I was with the others in the assumption that Edy was experimented on. I'm quite enticed seeing I was so off base, to see how this all pans out. Quite good!maisiehttp://www.retromaisie.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3322342997539658469.post-36839063576847509732009-09-26T17:17:20.265-07:002009-09-26T17:17:20.265-07:00Thanks for reading all. ^___^
And thank you for ...Thanks for reading all. ^___^<br /><br />And thank you for the link back, unrepentantmisanthrope (that is one of the most wesome names).The Lunar Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300943457749354465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3322342997539658469.post-85534613134545369382009-09-26T12:54:22.335-07:002009-09-26T12:54:22.335-07:00Wow! Today was definitely a good day to go trollin...Wow! Today was definitely a good day to go trolling for intriguing stories!<br /><br />I know you commented above that you really haven't gotten into the whole self-promotion thing - Trust me, I definitely understand that concept. But I'm definitely including a link over to your site when I update mine later today.<br /><br />Great jod!!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3322342997539658469.post-40350915144446694232009-09-25T15:37:15.740-07:002009-09-25T15:37:15.740-07:00Wow...how interesting! Like the others, I assumed...Wow...how interesting! Like the others, I assumed that Edy was in the lab to because she was the subject of experiments. It makes more sense now why she is a human without abilities (I noticed that in chapter 1, and wondered about it).Rachelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13290513828337050778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3322342997539658469.post-91994933820391045102009-09-25T03:53:08.499-07:002009-09-25T03:53:08.499-07:00Wow. Bounced over here after your comments on my ...Wow. Bounced over here after your comments on my blog. Thanks you! This looks great and I'm really looking forward to diving into this one over the weekend!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3322342997539658469.post-53967183277064088032009-09-24T20:51:43.499-07:002009-09-24T20:51:43.499-07:00Welcome, insidehopesprings! And thank you. There...Welcome, insidehopesprings! And thank you. There is definitely something with these two!<br /><br />Thank you very much, MedlyMisty. For your kind words and the invite. I suppose that I'm just another one of those people who're are horrible at self promotion. Plus, perhaps subconsciously, this is a story I am nervous to share with it being something that was once so close to me.<br /><br /><br />I actually visited your forum just the other day (saw the link on Monday Morning's blog) and I loved reading through the threads and hearing from the others. You'll see me soon. ^___^The Lunar Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300943457749354465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3322342997539658469.post-10167460067949975522009-09-24T14:47:29.299-07:002009-09-24T14:47:29.299-07:00I just found this story. It's very hidden awa...I just found this story. It's very hidden away, isn't it?<br /><br />Anyway - it's great and so interesting and creative and has good pictures and is well written. And so I'd like to invite you to a little Sims 3 story community I'm working on. :)<br /><br />http://valleysunsims.proboards.com/index.cgi<br /><br />No pressure and I understand if it's not your thing. But I do like to think of it as my little 19th century salon where I'm gathering the best Sims 3 story authors, and I think you'd fit in.<br /><br />It really is unique - the blurry memory reminds me a bit of Eternal Sunshine of the Spotless Mind.MedleyMistyhttp://medleymisty.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3322342997539658469.post-87637375193637893882009-09-24T04:48:19.674-07:002009-09-24T04:48:19.674-07:00This is a great look at the past. There's defi...This is a great look at the past. There's definitely something between these two - that they found each other in the way they did ... <br /><br />Another great chapter.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3322342997539658469.post-21222333227429616632009-09-23T06:35:08.310-07:002009-09-23T06:35:08.310-07:00I never even considered that you might think she w...I never even considered that you might think she was an experiment also. D'oh! Luckily, that assumption of mine (that you'd somehow know she wasn't an experiment herself) actually works out well. Surprise! <br /><br />Carla, thank you! I love that last picture. But the unblurry version. Once I finish, I think I might make a post and show all the test shots I took before I started working on this and that picture, but unblurry.<br /><br />As for your question, yes. XD *holds back any further comment*<br /><br /><br />Laura, *hugs* Thank you so much. Your comment totally made my morning. I'm constantly bogged down by fears that I've gone too weird. But I haven't even started the weird parts yet.<br /><br />Their whole relationship is complicated, but her relation to the people working on him is half of the foundation of their odd dynamic.The Lunar Foxhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00300943457749354465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3322342997539658469.post-9806081888813465262009-09-23T06:11:23.023-07:002009-09-23T06:11:23.023-07:00Oooh!!! This was SO good! And so well thought-ou...Oooh!!! This was SO good! And so well thought-out too, even down to how she would be blurry herself because she hadn't looked in any mirrors. <br /><br />I also assumed Edy as an experiment as well - it never crossed my mind that she could have been there for one of her parents! What a neat surprise! And it adds an interesting dynamic to their relationship as well, that she's related to the people who used to experiment on him.<br /><br />Love, love, LOVE this story! More please :)Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04990333808465359314noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-3322342997539658469.post-71398837727357786412009-09-22T18:22:25.982-07:002009-09-22T18:22:25.982-07:00It was really cool to learn more about Michael'...It was really cool to learn more about Michael's powers, or at least what they were like at the beginning. That last line was really creepy (in a good way!). I think it's how you can just see one of his eyes in the accompanying picture - he could be thinking <i>anything</i>!<br /><br />That third picture of Edy is a great one - nice expression you captured there!<br /><br />I am all curious about Edy's parents now, seeing you made a quick mention of them. I had assumed Edy was being experimented on when you said she and Michael met in the labs but she just lived there, because of her father?Carlahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09140819019098738245noreply@blogger.com